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Oversize can be reasonable if a damn character can explain it. Congratulations on exceeding the standards and imagination of any other writer on this site. It's been said several times in all the comments posted so far. And the variety, reflecting the different relationships of Ed and each of his ladies, is obvious to anyone with an open heart. Took me quite a while to read as it seamed to be never-ending, although that would have been a good thing as I was really enjoying the story. Keep up the good writing, I will read the rest of your work. You are even better than some actual novels i've read. He was, more often than not, tongue tied around women so couldn't claim to have a silver tongue. Luv u for giving us such a treasure and such a touching story..reading dis site for so long..other story excited and touched me like dis one...u never stop writing like dis Thank u, miss, again for such a grt story ... just not all in one big lump like this one was Not bad not bad at all first of pace the actions a guy doesn't get whipped by sorority girls then a week later almost shot and slow down with some of the lovely dovely crap besides that great story Good sex inspired by real affection and honest passion can never be lame or boring. By the time you to chapter 2,432 the sex is lame and boring. I enjoyed your story very much, it's both plenty sexual "very hot" and the character development left me actually caring for everyone in the story beyond just sexually. It can definitely pass as an erotic novel for men, if that sort of thing actually exist. I've never seen such quality writing in this site before. He wasn't strikingly handsome nor was he fabulously wealthy.
Luv u for giving us such a treasure and such a touching story..reading dis site for so long..other story excited and touched me like dis one...u never stop writing like dis Been reading on this site for months and this was my favorite story of them all. hope there's more of the story, to let us know what happened to tie up some of the loose ends. And the same sex over and over with very little variety. It had lots of other toys too but he hadn't really played with them yet. The truck was a present from some of the ladies he loved. ******** Prologue: Edward Walters wasn't gifted with great intelligence.
It was one oh those you just couldn't stop reading. great story, but damn dude, break it up into smaller parts, way too long to read all at once and a bitch to try to remember where to come back to.